匿笑n 发表于 2021-6-21 10:57:56

江西中考作文引发热议的背后,是试题刁钻,还是备考不足?

<p data-track="3" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); margin-top: 0px !important;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">“</span><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(240, 65, 66); --tt-darkmode-color: #F04142;">作文有点离谱。</span></span><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">”学生甲。</span></p><p data-track="125" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">“</span><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(240, 65, 66); --tt-darkmode-color: #F04142;">作文考得好奇葩。</span></span><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">”学生乙。</span></p><p data-track="126" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">“</span><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(240, 65, 66); --tt-darkmode-color: #F04142;">第一下看到很惊讶。</span></span><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">”学生丙。</span></p><p data-track="127" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">“</span><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(240, 65, 66); --tt-darkmode-color: #F04142;">平时没有写过这样类型的。</span></span><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">”学生丁。</span></p><p data-track="11" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">面对此次中考作文,江西的考生出来后,在接受采访时,说出以上这些话。</span></p><p data-track="13" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">江西的中考作文,究竟是怎样的呢?为何学生对此有如此大的反应呢?我们来看一下,如下:</span></p><blockquote class="pgc-blockquote-abstract" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 20px 0px; padding: 16px 20px; border: none; quotes: none; position: relative; text-align: justify; color: rgb(80, 80, 80); background: rgb(244, 245, 246); font-size: 18px; line-height: 1.64; border-radius: 4px; font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; white-space: normal;"><p style="box-sizing: border-box; padding: 0px; border: 0px; margin-top: 0px !important; margin-bottom: 0px !important;">清晨,几个人在郊外散步,忽然听到一阵凄厉的鸡叫声,只见一个人抓着一只鸡走来。鸡尾羽略长,颇似野鸡。散步人问:“敢抓野鸡?”那人气愤地说:“邻居家的公鸡!半夜啼叫,害得我一夜没睡,我一早就把它买来,马上就让它变成盘中餐!”散步人笑而不语。</p><p data-track="129" style="box-sizing: border-box; padding: 0px; border: 0px; margin-top: 0px !important; margin-bottom: 0px !important;">题目一:将材料扩写成一篇具体、生动的文章,题目自拟。要求:不得泄露个人信息,不少于600字。</p><p data-track="130" style="box-sizing: border-box; padding: 0px; border: 0px; margin-top: 0px !important; margin-bottom: 0px !important;">题目二:角度不同,对事物的看法也不同。从材料中公鸡、买鸡人、散步人等不同角度可以悟出不同的道理。请任选一个角度,自主立意,自拟题目,写一篇文章。要求:文体不限(诗歌除外),不得泄露个人信息;不少于600字。</p></blockquote><p></p><p class="pgc-img-caption" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px !important;"><br/></p><p data-track="135" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #FF0C00;">老穆认为,考生之所以会有如此大的反应,主要有如下几点原因:</span></p><p data-track="131" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">【1】江西近几年的中考作文,大都是命题作文,可今年“画风突转”,来了材料作文,且是寓言故事,这让很多考生不适应。</p><p data-track="155" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">说句心里话,考生不适应,也是平时备考不足的表现,材料作文也是中考常考题型,平时为何不多去关注呢?</p><p data-track="132" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">【2】写作难度不小,即便让高中生去写,也难以写好。</p><p data-track="133" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">【3】写作方向多,立意角度也多,这让学生一时间眼花缭乱,不知该如何抉择。</p><p data-track="134" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">【4】材料中人或物的行为比较“怪异”,倘若不认真思考,还真的难以琢磨透,尤其是“散步人”的行为。</p><p></p><p class="pgc-img-caption" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px !important;"><br/></p><p data-track="21" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">接下来,穆老师就用《老穆教你写中考作文》中的“</span><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(240, 65, 66); --tt-darkmode-color: #F04142;">五步审题法</span></span><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">”和“</span><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(240, 65, 66); --tt-darkmode-color: #F04142;">八大立意法</span></span><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">”来审题和立意。</span></p><p data-track="23" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #000000;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; background-color: rgb(0, 255, 255); --tt-darkmode-bgcolor: #00FFFF;">我们先来审题,如下:</span></span></span></p><p data-track="25" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #FF0C00;">第一步:阅内容,判类别</span></span></p><p data-track="26" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">很明显,这是材料作文。</span></p><p data-track="28" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #FF0C00;">第二步:据类别,看构成</span></span></p><p data-track="29" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">作文构成:材料+提示语+要求</span></p><p data-track="31" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #FF0C00;">第三步:析构成,晓题意</span></span></p><p data-track="32" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 176, 80); --tt-darkmode-color: #00B050;">&lt;1&gt; 读懂材料意思</span></span></p><p data-track="33" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">这段作文材料,属于寓言故事,我们可以选择“</span><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(240, 65, 66); --tt-darkmode-color: #F04142;">抓六要素法</span></span><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">”来理解材料意思。</span></p><p data-track="34" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">【公鸡】半夜啼叫</span></p><p data-track="35" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">【买鸡人】公鸡的行为影响他睡觉,故买来吃掉。</span></p><p data-track="36" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">【散步人】初以为有人抓野鸡,询问后得知是买来的公鸡,听完买鸡人解释后,笑而不语。</span></p><p data-track="37" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 176, 80); --tt-darkmode-color: #00B050;">&lt;2&gt; 知晓作文要求</span></span></p><p data-track="38" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">根据题目一和题目二写作要求,可知写作大方向有两个:</span></p><p data-track="39" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">【方向1】扩写作文材料。</span></p><p data-track="40" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">【方向2】自选角度写作。</span></p><p data-track="42" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #FF0C00;">第四步:据题意,明范围</span></span></p><p data-track="43" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">扩写作文材料:人与人关系类、情感道德类。</span></p><p data-track="44" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">自选角度写作:成长励志类、哲理思辨类、人与人关系类、时代发展类。</span></p><p data-track="46" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #FF0C00;">第五步:据范围,选文体</span></span></p><p data-track="47" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">记叙文、议论文、寓言或小小说等。</span></p><p></p><p class="pgc-img-caption" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px !important;"><br/></p><p data-track="137" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #000000;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; background-color: rgb(0, 255, 255); --tt-darkmode-bgcolor: #00FFFF;">接下来,我们再来立意,如下:</span></span></span></p><p data-track="143" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">我们可以采用<span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(240, 65, 66); --tt-darkmode-color: #F04142;">对象立意法</span></span>、<span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(240, 65, 66); --tt-darkmode-color: #F04142;">辩证立意法</span></span>、<span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(240, 65, 66); --tt-darkmode-color: #F04142;">反向立意法</span></span>和<span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(240, 65, 66); --tt-darkmode-color: #F04142;">推究因果法</span></span>进行立意。</p><p data-track="142" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0); --tt-darkmode-bgcolor: #D6D600;">【公鸡角度立意】</span></span></p><p data-track="53" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #FF0C00;">①我们平时说话,要懂得把握时机。</span></span></p><p data-track="55" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(54, 54, 54); --tt-darkmode-color: #A5A5A5;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; background-color: rgb(251, 253, 255); --tt-darkmode-bgcolor: #141414;">公鸡在不该打鸣的时间打鸣,遭来厄运。</span></span></p><p data-track="57" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(54, 54, 54); --tt-darkmode-color: #A5A5A5;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; background-color: rgb(251, 253, 255); --tt-darkmode-bgcolor: #141414;">同样道理,我们平时说话,也要把握时机,知道什么时候该讲话,什么时候不该讲话,倘若不懂这些,轻者引来他人嘲笑与批评,重者可能会有严重事情发生。</span></span></p><p data-track="59" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(54, 54, 54); --tt-darkmode-color: #A5A5A5;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; background-color: rgb(251, 253, 255); --tt-darkmode-bgcolor: #141414;">举个简单例子,当某人心情不好时,你还在那叽叽喳喳,又怎能不惹人讨厌呢?</span></span></p><p data-track="61" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #FF0C00;">②我们要遵守规则。</span></span></p><p data-track="63" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">一般情况下,公鸡在拂晓时才打鸣,这似乎是“约定俗成”的,也是被人所广泛接受的。但这只公鸡却“一反常态”,打破了这个“规则”。</span></p><p data-track="65" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">俗话说:“枪打出头鸟。”这只公鸡因为破坏了规则,故而遭此厄运。</span></p><p data-track="67" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">同样道理,在我们的生活、工作与学习中,同样要遵守规则,不可破坏规则。</span></p><p data-track="69" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #FF0C00;">③改革要找对方向,否则,是要付出代价的。</span></span></p><p data-track="71" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">公鸡选择“改革”,想要改变自己,想要改变“鸡界”的传统做法,但方向错了,结果牺牲了。</span></p><p data-track="73" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">同样道理,我们若想改革,一定要先找对方向,盲目的改革,只会付出惨痛的代价。</span></p><p data-track="152" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">比如诺基亚,虽然改革了,但方向不对,也就倒闭了。</p><p data-track="75" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #FF0C00;">④我们要正确利用自己的特长。</span></span></p><p data-track="77" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">公鸡打鸣,是他的一项本领和特长,在拂晓时分打鸣,人们感激他。但如果半夜打鸣,人们往往会讨厌它,我们从“周扒皮半夜鸡叫”的故事,便可得知。</span></p><p data-track="79" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">同样道理,作为人类,我们同样要正确利用自己的特长,倘若用错地方,那就会遭来麻烦,甚至会走上犯罪的道路。</span></p><p data-track="81" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">举个例子,比如某人跑得快,倘若用在体育竞技上,或许大有成就。倘若用在偷东西后逃跑,那就会坐牢。</span></p><p></p><p class="pgc-img-caption" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px !important;"><br/></p><p data-track="144" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0); --tt-darkmode-bgcolor: #D6D600;">【买鸡人角度】</span></span></p><p data-track="89" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #FF0C00;">①我们要选择恰当的方式解决问题。</span></span></p><p data-track="146" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 176, 80); --tt-darkmode-color: #00B050;">理解1:</span></span><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">公鸡半夜啼叫,对于买鸡人而言,的确影响他睡觉了,但买鸡人应当选择恰当的方式去解决,而不能采取买和吃的方式。</span></p><p data-track="93" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">试想一下,倘若明后天还有其它鸡叫呢?难道还要去买?</span></p><p data-track="95" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">与其这样,不如与邻居进行沟通,看看什么原因造成的,或许就能妥善解决这一问题。</span></p><p data-track="147" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 176, 80); --tt-darkmode-color: #00B050;">理解2:</span></span><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">公鸡半夜啼叫,影响了买鸡人,但买鸡人为了不影响邻里关系,选择买鸡而不是与其理论。</span></p><p data-track="99" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">试想一下,倘若发生争论,后果真的难以想象,或许邻里关系会恶化,以后更难以入眠。</span></p><p data-track="153" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">从这个角度来看,买鸡人的做法是可取的。</p><p data-track="101" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #FF0C00;">②我们看问题要全面,不可武断。</span></span></p><p data-track="103" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">公鸡为何会半夜啼叫呢?我想,肯定是有原因的,或许是受到光亮的影响,或许是遇到其它一些特殊情况。</span></p><p data-track="104" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">同样道理,当我们看到一些不合常规的问题时,我们要冷静思考,或许就能发现我们意想不到的问题,避免错怪了好人。</span></p><p data-track="106" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #FF0C00;">③我们要学会从自身找原因,而不是将责任推卸给他人。</span></span></p><p data-track="108" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">买鸡人睡不着觉,或许有其它原因,鸡叫只是“诱因”,如果不从自身找原因,而是责怪他人,问题可能永远也得不到解决,也有可能诱发其它问题。</span></p><p data-track="110" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">这一次影响他的是鸡,如果下一次是人呢?又当如何解决?</span></p><p></p><p class="pgc-img-caption" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; margin-bottom: 0px !important;"><br/></p><p data-track="145" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0); --tt-darkmode-bgcolor: #D6D600;">【散步人角度】</span></span></p><p data-track="114" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #FF0C00;">①眼见不一定为实,不可轻易下结论。</span></span></p><p data-track="116" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">散步人刚开始还以为有人抓野鸡,经过一番询问后,才知是公鸡。由此可见,眼见不一定为实,我们下结论之前,最好要经过一番求证。</span></p><p data-track="118" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(255, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #FF0C00;">②我们不要有“事不关己,高高挂起”的心态,沉默未必是好事。</span></span></p><p data-track="119" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">散步人笑而不语,这笑声中透露出一些嘲笑,体现出一种“事不关己,高高挂起”的心态,这样的举动及行为是不可取的。</span></p><p data-track="120" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">试想一下,倘若人人如此,这个世界将会是怎样的呢?</span></p><p data-track="149" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; font-weight: 700; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #000000;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; background-color: rgb(0, 255, 255); --tt-darkmode-bgcolor: #00FFFF;">【结束语】</span></span></span></p><p data-track="123" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">老穆认为,江西的中考作文命题,尽管说难度不小,但对所有考生而言,都是一样的,因而也是公平的。</span></p><p data-track="150" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; margin-bottom: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">通过此次作文命题,给了我们老师和学生一个提醒,我们平时要关注和重视作文,命题作文、半命题作文、材料作文、话题作文、漫画作文等都要广泛涉猎,做到有备无患。</p><p data-track="124" style="box-sizing: border-box; margin-top: 20px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(34, 34, 34); font-family: PingFang SC, Hiragino Sans GB, Microsoft YaHei, WenQuanYi Micro Hei, Helvetica Neue, Arial, sans-serif; font-size: 18px; text-align: justify; white-space: normal; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255); margin-bottom: 0px !important;"><span style="box-sizing: border-box; margin: 0px; padding: 0px; border: 0px; color: rgb(0, 0, 0); --tt-darkmode-color: #A3A3A3;">朋友们,你们对此有怎样的看法?欢迎大家在下方的评论区留言!</span></p><p><br/></p><p>来源:老穆说语文</p><link rel="stylesheet" href="http://bbs.jjxw.cn/source/plugin/wcn_editor/public/wcn_editor_fit.css?v134_zA0" id="wcn_editor_css"/>

ygq321 发表于 2021-6-21 11:29:42

我觉得出题者把15岁孩子当成了可深度针砭时弊的社会人,就请问在读的各位15岁时可看懂社会?这个文章连我45岁的人都看不懂,不知如何写(本人也是90年代本科生,在机关写材料)。怎么叫15岁孩子写?出的题看不出题意在哪里,有点莫名其妙的感觉。

cfty 发表于 2021-6-21 15:00:48

难不难首先不提,不同人有不同理解。但是寓意确实深刻。这篇短文体现了几个寓意: 1. 不准鸡乱叫,乱叫必死。 2.作为鸡的主人,在金钱的面前,鸡始终是鸡。 3.野鸡(保护动物),同样是鸡,但是是吃不得的。 4.这只鸡被抓了,知道命运已终结,发出凄惨的叫声,但是路人也只是笑笑走开,因为在正常看来,鸡本身就是盘中餐。他的惨叫并不会引起大家的注意。 5.如果同样是野鸡的惨叫?

c长momo 发表于 2021-6-21 11:28:50

我姑娘看完题目说,可以从买鸡人的角度写,人不要太自私了,要学会宽容和忍让,不要因为打扰到你一次,你就把鸡给杀了,不知道这么的跑题没。

冬之萤火虫 发表于 2021-6-21 17:12:44

自认为我自己,水平连初中生都不如了

九槑 发表于 2021-6-21 15:09:11

像那看不见的墙 发表于 2021-6-21 11:38
这种题目也难写!证明你的知识面太少了!课外书少看了!生活留意的太少了!这篇文章可以站在散步人的角度来 ...

但是你要考虑到这是中考啊,这个作文还是有一定难度的。

林中人 发表于 2021-6-21 13:34:40

分析的有道理。此题目发出信号,国家需要创新人才,需要老师从多角度教孩子。

迈克566 发表于 2021-6-21 11:30:41

说实在的我没看懂题目,要不整个黄焖鸡米饭?

羽落後 发表于 2021-6-21 11:23:08

一、出题人为了显示自己的水平高,出的云山雾罩。要知道这是中考! 二、对一篇短文应从整体上去理解它的寓意,把握其主题。而不是从文中摘取某句话,某个点去理解,难免以偏概全,带入歧途。(个人观点,如有不妥,万分抱歉)

像那看不见的墙 发表于 2021-6-21 11:38:05

这种题目也难写!证明你的知识面太少了!课外书少看了!生活留意的太少了!这篇文章可以站在散步人的角度来写!然后切入到买鸡的的角度,用买鸡人的叙述来还原买鸡的的生活苦恼!及反应人民生活的故事!前面可以写一些散步人对周边环境的改善和农村的变化,对新农村的赞美和对幸福生活的追求!个人观点!六百字不够写!
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