作文:《班主任》
<!----><style type="text/css">html{font-size:375%}</style><link href="http://pic.app.jjxw.cn/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010486" rel="stylesheet" position="1" data-qf-origin="/static/publish/css/style.css?v=1605251010486"><div class="preview_article "> <!----> <p>分享分享精彩,这个学生写的作文,题目是我的班主任,一位兢兢业业,一心扑在教学上的好班主任,形象逼真跃然纸上,接理应该得满分,抑或者是99分,为何离及格还差一分,还要求该生的家长,妈妈到校来一趟,难道写错了?本人愚钝,问题到底出在哪?望友友赐教解惑[祈祷]。<br />并附译文,及原文,供分析。<br />附学生作文译文:<br />《我的班主任》<br />我的班主任:他是这个世界上,操心最多的人,人很年轻,<br />头先秃了。<br />他的发丝:在衣服上,在讲台上,在作业本上,在课桌上,<br />…<br />就是不在自己的头上,<br />他就像—朵蒲公英,<br />风起!头秃!<br />老师批文:喊你妈妈来一趟!<br />此文差一分及格:<br />59分!</p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="http://pic.app.jjxw.cn/front2_0_FmonJL0IIDAtK2b8DcvsPHtp-IJA.1629755733.jpg?watermark/3/text/QOeLruWtkOWxseS4reS6ug==/fontsize/400/dissolve/80/gravity/SouthEast/fill/IzM2MzYzYQ==/font/5b6u6L2v6ZuF6buR/dx/10/dy/5/text/SUQ6NDYxNTI5/fontsize/400/dissolve/80/gravity/SouthEast/fill/IzM2MzYzYQ==/font/5b6u6L2v6ZuF6buR/dx/10/dy/-20" alt="" width="941" height="1324" data-qf-origin="front2_0_FmonJL0IIDAtK2b8DcvsPHtp-IJA.1629755733.jpg?watermark/3/text/QOeLruWtkOWxseS4reS6ug==/fontsize/400/dissolve/80/gravity/SouthEast/fill/IzM2MzYzYQ==/font/5b6u6L2v6ZuF6buR/dx/10/dy/5/text/SUQ6NDYxNTI5/fontsize/400/dissolve/80/gravity/SouthEast/fill/IzM2MzYzYQ==/font/5b6u6L2v6ZuF6buR/dx/10/dy/-20" /></p><p class="empty_paragraph"> </p><p class="qf_image big noneditable" contenteditable="false"><img src="http://pic.app.jjxw.cn/front2_0_FqEr_o-_JGmC5-enSB7deXCcex2O.1629755766.jpg?watermark/3/text/QOeLruWtkOWxseS4reS6ug==/fontsize/400/dissolve/80/gravity/SouthEast/fill/IzM2MzYzYQ==/font/5b6u6L2v6ZuF6buR/dx/10/dy/5/text/SUQ6NDYxNTI5/fontsize/400/dissolve/80/gravity/SouthEast/fill/IzM2MzYzYQ==/font/5b6u6L2v6ZuF6buR/dx/10/dy/-20" alt="" width="640" height="1280" data-qf-origin="front2_0_FqEr_o-_JGmC5-enSB7deXCcex2O.1629755766.jpg?watermark/3/text/QOeLruWtkOWxseS4reS6ug==/fontsize/400/dissolve/80/gravity/SouthEast/fill/IzM2MzYzYQ==/font/5b6u6L2v6ZuF6buR/dx/10/dy/5/text/SUQ6NDYxNTI5/fontsize/400/dissolve/80/gravity/SouthEast/fill/IzM2MzYzYQ==/font/5b6u6L2v6ZuF6buR/dx/10/dy/-20" /></p><p> </p> <!----></div> 小孩吐真言,童言无忌,是真的,呵呵走你 灵鱼 发表于 2021-10-2 20:00
小孩吐真言,童言无忌,是真的,呵呵
童言无忌
老师想孩子妈了 头发不在头上,钙量充足,雄性十足,小孩作文揭露了这一秘密,老师自然不开心,所以打了“不及格”。
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